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He paused and looked down. There are not many events that can get you to do that, he thought. Not a panicked stop, just a pause. What pauses me these days? Well, that did.

He picked up the ball and tilted his head to the park where it had rolled from. A meek child, wearing an all-too-expensive NY Mets jersey stood timidly among his friends as they lightly tapped and pushed his shoulder and back towards the man. Git it, git it, he heard coming softly from the side of the still creaking swingset.

"I wonder if he'd be like that to his friends if it was their ball", I thought. I paused again. Second time.

The child looked over each shoulder as he began his tired, skulking move towards the park bench where an old man was seated next to a drooping willow tree. Ominous, he though, but not with that word. A word he couldn't think of because he hadn't asked Ms. Pristly what the word for a scary old man underneath a scary old tree would be. She'd say, Ominous, but not until later. Now, he was just scary.

Oh, boy, I thought. Now I've got to act like the adult and either throw this damn thing, or keep this strange scowl on my face. I stopped scowling and smiled a bit.

The man smiled. Wow, now he's even scarier.

Now the child looks even more nervous. Well, I can't stop smiling now. He can't stop smiling now, he though, otherwise it'd look even weirder. Maybe there was someone watching who would think he was a luring pedophile. He wasn't, and there was no one looking.

He saw the child gulp and move towards him. Head on, stern look, he was taking on an enemy. I'm the enemy. I'm the enemy, he thought. I'm the adversity.

This man is my adversity, he thought, but he didn't know that word either. He just didn't want to be called a chicken when he got back. That's a word he knew. I hate chicken.

A few willows leaves started to fall, escaping their wooden captors with the autumn wind. The leaves would've thanked the wind, but neither of them were, at present time, capable of any cognitive or communicative abilities.

"Hey, Mister."

How cliche, thought Mister.

"Could ya roll that ball this way?"

The boy leaned down and held out his hands, waiting for the roll. Staring now only at the ball. The old man saw the boy, staring at his shoes, and paused. Third time. What should I do?

Mister grew panicked. What am I going to do? Should I roll it, and just be a sidenote in this child's life. Someone he'll forget. Should I wait a little longer, maybe ask him a question. I don't want to scare the boy, I just want. What do I want? What does he want?

"What do you want?"

The boy stumbled at this. He said. He wanted his ball. That's all. He looked up at the old man.

"I just want my ball, sir."

Sir smiled. He nodded, and rolled the ball under his foot towards the child. The boy sat, anxiously, and watched the slow roll of the bright red ball.

"You've got some guts and good friends."

He didn't know what gutsand was, but he didn't think his friends were very good. They made him face this old man, and now he knew they'd be hiding. He dared not look away. He caught it.

He caught it. Good. And now he's scurrying off. His friends are hiding, though, didn't even notice. Mine are, too.

Mister turned around to a group, now appearing from behind the willow tree. Three old men and two old women, some crouched, some standing, withdraw from beyond the lowered branches and trunk.

"Man, you did it. You're not a chicken after all."

He hated chicken, too.
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I wrote this on the plane across the Atlantic as part of a nervous stream of prose. I liked it, it's not well edited, but it's good enough to let out into the world.

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:iconstjoan:
Ha! cute, terribly cute. love the play of it.

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`roguewolf19 looks so Balla.
:iconimperfect:
No shame here, mister. I liked it when you read it to me and i like it now, even without reading it :)

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I love the way you change to "Mister" after the child addresses him/you as that!
How cliche, thought Mister.
That line! I love that line!

Great ending too! Good stuff :)

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I secretly changed the entire thing.

Glad you enjoyed it.

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:iconcoshdaddy:
I wasn't really aiming for cute, but I think it kind of did end up that way. I'm so used to having morose characters and situations that it was a lot of fun doing something just really light.

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I love this little story. I think that it is really charming. Great ending as well, it made me smile.

All in all, its a great job :)

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:iconein-kaltes-herz:
Sweet little story, the thoughts of the old guy are neat, as is the ending.

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It's a cute story, particularly the ending and the parts where the kid doesn't know certain words.

Not sure what advanced critique I could give, but I'd have to say you did a good job capturing a particularly akward moment.

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Mow da zeebas down
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Give dem to me
nice and dead.
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‘til me fed.”

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